a gaint tree its branches strech high and wide
a swing set swing move along with wide
forest still wild teeming with wild life
kids will play laughing watching
green blades shone brighthly with dew
Sun about to disappear moon rising up
sometimes deer will apear prancing
sometime humming bird filt around
more home afar to be shelter for people
maybe deer baying mrunching prancing
This is very well created. There is a lot of good details going on here :)
ReplyDeletei love this poem. it has alot of details.
ReplyDeleteooh thxs!!!
ReplyDeleteDanna, you've used strong, beautiful images. I like the images of dew glistening on blades of grass...and children, deer, hummingbirds. Nice!
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